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Song Review - Please Come Home To Me

My old college songwriting buddy, Michael Stephenson, and I have gotten together again, and we're starting to post our original songs up on a blog for more feedback.

This first track, Please Come Home To Me, was recorded with just acoustic guitar and vocals, but we'd appreciate any feedback (positive or negative) you have on the lyrics, melody, performance, etc.

http://writersofsong.wordpress.com/2009/10/17/please-come-home-to-me/

There's a link there to just download the MP3, but you can also listen to it in your browser.

Thanks in advance for giving it a listen...
Mark Johnson & Michael Stephenson

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Permalink Reply by Tensionitis on October 22, 2009 at 11:47am: That song has good bones - nice melody, good chording, and good lyrics. Nice inflection, too. A bit of fleshing out, and it'd be even better.; ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Mark Johnson on October 22, 2009 at 12:40pm: Thanks for the review!

I'm guessing by "fleshing out" you mean recording another version with more instruments and just richer sound overall? If you meant something else, please correct me =); ▶ Reply to This

Permalink Reply by Tensionitis on October 23, 2009 at 11:01am: Yeah, exactly. Great start, though...; ▶ Reply to This

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