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Worry About Today

Time to throw down my guard,
she doesn’t care about me anymore.
She’s stolen my money and my time, but I’m
not going out without throwing down a fight,

= Chorus
But I just thought, it came like thunder,
that this relationship is going under,
and sitting at my desk makes me quickly forget,
why I ever showed you ANY respect,
but for you run away, worry about today.

On your porch and knocking on your door,
doesn’t seem to me that anybody’s home.
I guess it’s easier to run away than
to just say you’re sorry to me,

But I just thought, it came like thunder,
that this relationship is going under,
and sitting at my desk makes me quickly forget,
why I ever showed you ANY respect,
but for you run away, worry about

today when you see me, you’re gonna regret
the day that we both met.
This may be a game we play but I won’t lose,
cause when you cross me, it doesn’t cost me
anything except my respect for you.

This is about it. I may throw in another verse but I like it as is. What do you guys think?
RC~

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I follow your story after I read it the second time. The fight is too soft in the last verse. You may want to finish with a big punch. I am not talking about a physical fight, but the best kind. She needed to regret the stealing of your money and time. I know someone who have that done to him. The woman finish last, because she did not do right. Even though she has done you wrong you want to finish off first. That would be the way she would realize she lost even though she's richer. Try using more adjectives to describe the story. Truly, I followed the story after read it the second time without the chorus. Go out with a punch and the females will love you and the dudes with say yell. We all love when the good guy finishes like he should in real life.

I would love to hear this to music. Too bad I'm not near you and you could hire me as a bad ground singer. Nice song and I hope everything works out okay.

Paula
www.cdbaby.com/paulabenson

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